Crimson Twilight

sweet oblivian · 03-24-2006, 09:32 PM

Once again I am back in action.

After making Rise Of The Animalia: The Return Of Falinos which is doing great by the way I felt weird, it was a feeling like every thing that was not put into Falinos was still swirling around in my head, so after a couple months of thinking and talking to my good friend Typheus i have decided to make this thread to get all my ideas in order before I post the actual thread.

Now that the thread is put up I will be off for a couple of days so i will post all the info sunday some time around 7 or 8 PM probably, so until then have fun.

Typheus · 03-24-2006, 10:00 PM

I'm still a littel foggy on the details myself. Something to do with creatures you manifest n times of great emotion

sweet oblivian · 03-27-2006, 09:27 PM

Crimson Twilight. It is a story well known but little understoud. Since the begining of the new age these two words have been known to the ears of every human. Some say taht Crimson Twilight was a wild beast of unimaginable power, others believe it to have been a warrior of unmatched strength. No matter where you go a story of the Crimson Twilight is known.

Over a millenia ago the world was prosperous. The ancients lived in the great cities safe from the out side world. As there technology increased so did their population. For them every thing was perfect, and life was peaceful. Or so they thought. In one night the ancients were destroyed. Every city was obliterated in the blink of an eye. The ruins were left as a warning to all of the false civilization the ancients had created. The so called humanity they had created fell to its own lust for power.

Throw in a couple more things blab on just a little bit more and that is the back ground of the story. Since I am some what pressed for time, i will add the rest of this stuff to the back ground latter but let me just get it out of the way now.

Once Crimson Twilight destroyed the ancients cities the remnants of them spread out through the rest of the world which was inhabitied by humans that lived simple lives.

Because of the technology the ancients had they were able to control these creatures. These beasts were thought to be some type of effect left from the attack but they did not start to show up until a few generations after the attack. The ancients still alive spoke little about what had happened mostly because they could not understand. The only thing know was that it started in the central city which the location to is unknown.

The first of these creatures would appear in times of great stress or emotion. The limit is three and it usualy takes a few years to unlock all of them. The creatures are connected to their human. They are unable to speak but can communicate with emotion. Each one has its own personality but when focusing on just one the human and the beast become like one. The creatures are also able to gain abilitys through the emotions of the human. In a more aggresive mude the creature also becomes more aggresive and becomes a lot stronger, if the human was sad then the creature would take on a different ability like possibly become more defensive.

Okay I know that is some what extremly a lot to take in and kind of confusing may sound a little kidish but it is a lot easier to explain vocaly then in writing. The story will be a lot more mature then it sounds. Well after a little bit more organization the I will start up the thread so let the good times roll on and good night.

Typheus · 03-29-2006, 08:40 PM

Any limits on the creatures? What size are they to be, and what stengths, and intelligence. You know what I'm saying. Would someone be able to have a full grown dragon as a "summon" or just a smaller version of one about the size of the human...or perhaps even a figurine sized one XD

I like the ideas so far. I just want to know how close to Digimon the creature designs are going to be.

light dragon · 03-29-2006, 08:49 PM

I must say this sounds great. You can count me in when you begin this thread. If there is anything you need me to do just tell me and I will do my best. But all in all I love the idea.

sweet oblivian · 03-29-2006, 09:00 PM

Typheus, how bout we step out side the box of Digimon, Pokemon, and Monster Rancher for just a second and picture the world.

First off the limit is three creatures max, I thought I had put that in the post but I am lazy so any ways the size is what ever you want, of coarse you can not have a creature that can circle the earth five times over, so try to keep it limited so I guess nothing sky scraper size

just to make this clear the creatures are not summoned, they are living breathing organisms so they live along side of us.

Like I said intellegance is more based on attitude, each one has its own personality and in turn its own IQ so you could have a happy go lucky frog creature that could not figure out how to turn a door knob to save its life or a gloom and doom bear that can solve geometry.

Like I said while fighting you are connected with the creatures, so strength is based on your emotions, like if you feel happy like you are hyped up on sugar then the creature you are connected to will become a lot faster, but if you are feeling pumped up then the creature will become a lot stronger, this is also affected in terms of attack like at one point the creature might use its claws but if you are in a different type of mood then it may be able to shoot a beam out of its mouth.

Just keep in mind that you can only be connected to one creature at a time, but the other two will still be able to fight just only in thier normal mood.

so in short the person and creatures moods effect the creatures abilitys and its normal mood gives it a special boost towards every thing, so a hyper creature in a angry mood would still be a lot faster then a angry creature in a angry mood, of coarse creature some times get depressed or mad at things that happen and this can effect the balance needed to become one with the creature.

(look I was supposed to wrap up now I am going into even more detail)

The balance is what I spoke of earlier. For example if your creature was mad at something lets just say you and then you were going to get into a fight then you would be filled with rage and would be so consumed with this that you would be blinded with destroying your opponite and not beable to think, same thing if the creature was sad of frightened.

So any more questions, I can keep this up all day, oh and if any one is interested just post here.

(Thank you light dragon, i was so busy typing that i did not get your post hence the edit lol.)

Typheus · 03-29-2006, 09:14 PM

I was. But Digimon and Pokemon, along wih s-CRY-ed, are good comparisons for things dealing with "summoning" creatures out of nowhere. Even if the creatures are flesh and blood, they are still "summoned" at one point from a period of great emotional distress, correct? Either ways, at least now I can have a dragon in this thread too XD

Let's see here...well I hope you can get some people to join, such as light dragon here, that will not take two weeks to post. I made that mistake a couple times. You should know, you were in my s-CRY-ed thread as well as Drakengard.

sweet oblivian · 03-29-2006, 09:26 PM

Well the summon thing is just what is used for now, remember in Falinos, we went through five different ideas before picking one and it still was not understod once we started the thread but I am planning on this to turn out at least half as good as Falinos is, the plot is a lot different and I am more into modern/futuristic then fantasy which I think is where I will be posting this but then again it is a couple thousand years after a civilization was destroyed and they are not that low tech, this is actually startign to remind me of Final Fantasy X.

Even so this is just the idea, the pilot if you will there will be a whole lot more put into it once I really get my brain turning, I guess I am at the same point as Dragonreborn but I know what I want I just can't get to it yet it is like a post writers block were i cant come up with the connection from point to point, so it would help if you guys could give me a few things you think I should add or take out.

sweet oblivian · 03-30-2006, 09:28 PM

Oh and I also wanted to add something in. I am thinking about making it so that the creatures are not only animals. Notice how i underlined and bolded thinking, this idea came to my attention and i was not sure if I should do it since it could get a little bit out of hand but i might allow the use of humanoid creatures, maybe plant based ones as well i am not sure about any thing else except for the fact that there will be absolutly no robotic or mechanized creatures other then that I think I covered every thing so if I come up with any more ideas i will post them, also any one who is intersted just sign up here, I do not have a char sheet ready yet but until then just post some ideas and that you are interested.

Typheus · 03-30-2006, 09:42 PM

That's good enough for me. XD

To be honest I have nothing else I can add. I just hope some peple decide to join this. This seems like a very good idea for an RP. It would suck if it died even before it began.

Seadd · 03-30-2006, 09:49 PM

sooo ummm it sounds good and all can you just put the story in a easeir shorter verson lol

sweet oblivian · 03-30-2006, 10:09 PM

This is basicly all you need to know since I don't have the time to shorten every thing so just skim through, i will leave a line between the story and the information about the creatures

Over a millenia ago the world was prosperous. The ancients lived in the great cities safe from the out side world. As there technology increased so did their population. For them every thing was perfect, and life was peaceful. Or so they thought. In one night the ancients were destroyed. Every city was obliterated in the blink of an eye.

Because of the technology the ancients had they were able to control these creatures. These beasts were thought to be some type of effect left from the attack but they did not start to show up until a few generations after the attack. The ancients still alive spoke little about what had happened mostly because they could not understand. The only thing know was that it started in the central city which the location to is unknown.

The first of these creatures would appear in times of great stress or emotion. The limit is three and it usualy takes a few years to unlock all of them. The creatures are connected to their human. They are unable to speak but can communicate with emotion. Each one has its own personality but when focusing on just one the human and the beast become like one. The creatures are also able to gain abilitys through the emotions of the human. In a more aggresive mude the creature also becomes more aggresive and becomes a lot stronger, if the human was sad then the creature would take on a different ability like possibly become more defensive.
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First off the limit is three creatures max, I thought I had put that in the post but I am lazy so any ways the size is what ever you want, of coarse you can not have a creature that can circle the earth five times over, so try to keep it limited so I guess nothing sky scraper size

just to make this clear the creatures are not summoned, they are living breathing organisms so they live along side of us.

Like I said intellegance is more based on attitude, each one has its own personality and in turn its own IQ so you could have a happy go lucky frog creature that could not figure out how to turn a door knob to save its life or a gloom and doom bear that can solve geometry.

Like I said while fighting you are connected with the creatures, so strength is based on your emotions, like if you feel happy like you are hyped up on sugar then the creature you are connected to will become a lot faster, but if you are feeling pumped up then the creature will become a lot stronger, this is also affected in terms of attack like at one point the creature might use its claws but if you are in a different type of mood then it may be able to shoot a beam out of its mouth.

Just keep in mind that you can only be connected to one creature at a time, but the other two will still be able to fight just only in thier normal mood.

so in short the person and creatures moods effect the creatures abilitys and its normal mood gives it a special boost towards every thing, so a hyper creature in a angry mood would still be a lot faster then a angry creature in a angry mood, of coarse creature some times get depressed or mad at things that happen and this can effect the balance needed to become one with the creature.

The balance is what I spoke of earlier. For example if your creature was mad at something lets just say you and then you were going to get into a fight then you would be filled with rage and would be so consumed with this that you would be blinded with destroying your opponite and not beable to think, same thing if the creature was sad of frightened.

Typheus · 03-31-2006, 04:41 PM

Chaos, PM me on MSN sometime, I have some great ideas for the direction the RP can go. I REALLY hope we get some people in here, I have some kickass story ideas.

Omega Scorpius · 04-02-2006, 04:39 AM

Heck, why not? This sounds like good fun to me

sweet oblivian · 04-02-2006, 07:03 PM

Okay after a long awaite while i am finaly posting the char sheet

Name:
Age:
Appearence:
Creatures:
1: Name
Appearence
2: Name
Appearence
3: Name
Appearence
Bio:

Okay starting off any one under the age of 30 will have one creature and any one above taht will start off with two

Typheus · 04-02-2006, 07:44 PM

Name: Viceto Agulo

Age:19

Appearence:His hair comes down to right below his eyes and hangs spikes out at verious points. Green eyes, matching the only creature he has so far. Blue jeans, and wears a black shirt over a white long sleeve shirt. Has white shoes with a red jagged line on both sides of the shoe strings.

Creatures:
1: Name: Zolus

Appearence: A green dragon that is ten times Viceto's size.

2: Name: None yet
3: Name: None yet

Bio: Unlocked his beast when three men tried to gun down two friends of his. His old friends would have nothing to do with him once he discovered Zolus, even though Zolus TRIED to appear harmless. Ever since then, it was hard for Viceto to be around other people. Ever since, he has worked a job as a freelancer. Doing jobs that needed to be done, only at his own discretion.

sweet oblivian · 04-02-2006, 08:06 PM

Name: Tezal Mesna
Age: 17
Appearence: (post later)

Creatures:
1:
Name: Guorgous
Appearence: Gorugous looks much like a praying mantice, it is about fifteen feet tall and has two scikle like arms and four smaller ones that can not reach out very far but are good for climbing, Gorugous is a deep red in color and is a very destructive and aggressive creature, it has four legs that it uses for walking that resemble the four arms on its torso but are much longer, it also has wings but can only fly for short period of time.

Bio: Tezal has lived in the forest village of Gninru Toor his entire life. His father was one of the many adventures to search for the Crimson Twilight well against his mothers wishes. Since then his mother only spoke of his father with hatered. Tezal first met Gorugous when his village was attacked by raiders, Gorugous made a quick finish of the raiders and now Tezals mother has sent him to learn more about these creatures from his grandfather.

light dragon · 04-02-2006, 08:11 PM

Name:Kelley Dransons
Age:19
Appearence:http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...agon/aroms.jpg
and her playing basketball:
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...n/faa3ae94.jpg
and her dressed up:
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...eral-00190.jpg

Creatures:
1: Celestia
Appearence:
Baby form:
http://www.kentaronishino.com/white-baby-tiger.gif
Full form:
http://www.sharrock.com/drawing_whitetiger_t.jpg

2: Name:Not yet
3: Name:Not yet

Bio:Kelley had been working on a project for her own studies at the park at night. Little did she know she would run into a large gang who would have liked nothing better then to use her. She had faught off a few before Celestia apeared and now Kelley works with injured animals on the outskirts of the town she lives in.