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Old 02-25-2006, 06:04 PM   #1
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Eragon/Eldest: ~Zabieru~

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Ok, so basically this thread is based on the books Eragon and Eldest. The summary below is a bit long (sorry about that) but it is of these two books combined. Much of what happened is left out but It's mainly for people who never read Eragon and Eldest. The thread that will take place is on what happened after the whole story, and Zabieru is the name of Galbatorixes black dragon. You do not have to PM to join and I'm not going to list ALL of the characters. The ones that are mainly needed are Eragon, Roran, Murtagh, and Galbatorix. You can play more than one character, for example, if I'm playing Arya I can also mention what Urgals might say and etc. Just make sure to put their parts in different colors >.<;; And one more thing...you are allowed to make up a character just PM it to me. If your playing an already made character, you can just go ahead and post, you don't need a character sheet or anything.

(I'm playing Arya by the way, and I'll take whatever character is left like Angela or someone.)

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Eragon was a 15 year old boy who found a strange blue stone in The Spine, an untamed range of mountains near the small village he called home, Carvahall, which was a region in Alagaisia, and was ruled by an evil king, otherwise known as Galbatorix, who was once one of the dragon riders. After being unable to sell or trade his find, Eragon witnessed a baby dragon, which hatched from inside the "stone". Dragons were a species thought to be extinct, with the exception of Galbatorix's dragon. He raised the dragon in secret until two hooded figures, the Ra'zac, entered the town looking for his blue stone.

Eragon and Saphira, as he named his dragon, managed to escape danger by hiding in the forest, but Eragon's Uncle Garrow was not as fortunate. The Ra'zac killed his uncle and destroyed the farm house. Eragon, remembering tales of the past, took it upon himself to become one of the dragon riders, the ancient warriors who were slaughtered by the crazed Galbatorix in his rise to power. Accompanied by Brom, a mysterious old story teller from his village who knew much about the Dragon Riders, swordfighting, and magic, Eragon learned the ways of the Dragon Riders while they hunted down the elusive Ra'zac. Much researching in the town of Teirm lead Brom to the conclusion that the Ra'zac resided in Dras-leona. However, revenge was not what Eragon found in Dras-Leona. He, Saphira, and Brom were instead lured into the Ra'zac's ambush. They were rescued by an unknown stranger, Murtagh. Unfortunately, Brom was gravely injured, and he soon died--but not before revealing his past to Eragon.

The new company of three (Eragon, Murtagh and Saphira) traveled in search of the hidden Varden, a strong rebel faction which Brom had mentioned on their journey. On the way, Eragon had many dreams about an elf, all of which featured her suffering great pain. Ultimately, Eragon was captured and imprisoned in the same prison as where the elf was being held captive. Murtagh and Saphira took a daring rescue and Eragon escaped with the elf. But this does not happen without incident. Eragon and Murtagh had a face off with a shade, one of the most powerful creatures in the land. The fact that a Shade was walking freely in the land made Eragon believe that some monstorous plan was afoot and that Galbatorix, the king of Alagaisia, himself a traitor of the dragon riders, had allied himself with the foulest creatures of the land.

The new dragon rider faced many perils on his way to the Varden, specifically the army of Urgals at their heels. Once in side the Varden's fortress, hidden deep whithin the Beor Mountains, Eragon learned of the pact between the dwarves, the elves and the Varden and how it was that Saphira's egg was magically teleported to the Spine. The group was at last able to rest, but the invasion by the army of Urgals was imminent. An intercepted message from Galbatorix confirmed their fears that the king was involved. In a battle that follows, a seemingly endless army of Urgals seemed poised to take the fortress, before Eragon destroyed the Shade, Durza, that he had recently encountered, but in exchange for a terrible wound on his back that left him disfigured. The Varden's forces routed the Urgals.

The land of Alagaesia suffered under the Empire of Galbatorix, and Eragon and his dragon Saphira, were expected to bring this to an end. But Eragon was young and had much to learn, so he was sent off to the elven forest city of Ellesmera, where he and Saphira were tutored in magic, battle skills, and the ancient language by the wise former Rider Oromis and his elderly dragon Glaedr. While this took place, Roran still remained in Carvahall, and was the target of the hideous Ra'zac. These creatured wanted to capture Roran because he was related to Eragon, therefor must have has something to do with the stone they were in search of. Because of the Ra'zac's attacks, he had to lead the villagers on an escape over the mountains.

The two narratives moved toward a massive battle with the forces of Galbatorix, where Eragon learnd that his father was Morzan, whom was engaged with the kind, and his brother was Murtagh, whom had betrayed him for Galbatorix. Eragon and Saphira fought Murtagh and his dragon Eldest, but Murtagh was no match for Eragon. Letting Eragon live, Murtagh left with his dragon, and Eragon knew the battle was over, although Galbatorix would show up to fight Eragon once he was stronger and to take over what was remaining.
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Old 02-26-2006, 03:20 PM   #2
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Name: Allen Kaeldrin
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Weapons: Velketor's Nail(Enchanted Saber), Alchemy, Black Arts(Necromancy)
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Personality: The Money is the most Important thing.
Appearence: A Black Haired man, with Burning red eyes, wearing black leather armor.

*Allen walked through the havoc of the last battle, He found such needless combat distasteful, when he could kill with a gesture, An Urgal charged him, and he used his secret weapon. Drawing his sword, he applied an oily substance to it and Attacked the filthy creature. Upon striking it, the phosphorous solution Ignited, he then threw a black vial at it. The Gunpowder exploded with a deafening BANG, Allen felt alot better*
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Old 02-26-2006, 04:55 PM   #3
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(there are a few errors in your summary)

Name: Tatsua Semori
Race: human
gender: male
age: 16
weapons: diamond bladed katana, and small magical abilities.
armor: cloth (black) his shirt is half tuck half untucked.
personality:loves to fight, but loves peace even more
appearance: http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f1...guy_edit_1.jpg
alliance: varden
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Tatsua knelt in the battlefield. Blood soaked his body. It had been a long fight. He was tired, and sore. Three urgals stood next to him. All seeming to be fine.
It was funny. Three days ago, he would have killed them. But now he had risked his life fighting beside him. Straightening up, he held his hand out to them. One shook it, almost crushing his hand.
"It seems the past can be the past", he said,"You're good allies. I'm proud to have fought beside you".
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Old 02-28-2006, 04:28 AM   #4
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Name: Jaxyral Shadestalker
Race: Elf
Gender: Male
Age: 102
Weapons: A short bone bow. Two blue serated scimitars, both enchanted with an ice enchantment to counteract dragon fire, and variuos throwing knifes concealed all over his body
Personality: Whatever it takes to finish a job. Ruthless, careless. Whoever pays more.
Appearance: Dark skin, unaturaly so for his pale kin. His eyes are striking blue, but hold a coldness to them. Features are sharp almost demonicaly so, but still handsome. Short brown hair, usualy wearing a dark green hunting cloak, the hood hiding his face.
Alliance: Private contracter, Galbatorix, could change depends on offer.

**ic**

Jax stands in the small outcropping of trees watching the remanants of the battle. The slaughter almost brought a smile to his lips, almost. He pulls his blade out of the lifeless corpse of a enemy soldier, smirking as he steps on the body to pry the blade free.

"As long as the blood flows, the money flows..." he mutters scanning the area for any stranded soldiers. He resheathes his swords, slipping them adeptly into the scabards at his hips, and walks out from his vanatage point.

The black chain armor he wears stays silent as he walks briskly to the battlefield, placing one foot infront of the other in a graceful catlike stalk. He scans the ground for any unusual signs of tracks then stops, kneeling down and examining the track of a dragon, tracing it thoughtfuly with his hand.

"Wonderful... another damned dragon," he mutters sardonicaly as he walks away, following the tracks into the distance. His gloved hands rest on the hilts of his swords, as he walks off as quietly as a ghost, his dragonhide boats absorbing his footfalls.
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Old 02-28-2006, 07:10 AM   #5
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Hearing the sound of continuous battle (as so she thought), Arya awoke from the tent she ahd been sleeping in. She stood silently and walked past all other shelters. Crouching down behind one tent, she noticed an Urgal and Tatsua shaking hands. What she had also seen was Allen, who attempted to kill one. ~Hey they betrayed us now?~ she thought in wonder.

Shuffling as quiet as possible back to her shelter, she pulled on her usual battle outfit of black and tucked her pants into her boots. Walking back out again she showed herself and spoke. "Out this late?" she asked to the two but did not notice Jaxyral.
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Old 02-28-2006, 04:27 PM   #6
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Eragon/Eldest

Occ:I'll be Eragon and his dragon Saphira
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Eragon shook his head as he got back on Saphira.He still didn't beleived that Morzan is his father and Murtagh is his brother.As Saphira flew back to the Varden camp she could sense that something is wrong with Eragon.Is something wrong Eragon?Saphira asked.Eragon shook his head before answering,No,nothing is wrong.I just couldn't believe what I just found out.As Saphira touched down Eragon slid of her.He noticed a little way off Arya had just emerged from her tent.
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Old 02-28-2006, 10:43 PM   #7
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Continues walking, stepping over corpses, leaning down occasionaly to loot anything that catches his eye. He glances up, his eyes focusing on the saphire dragon in the distance and sighs again as his hand tighten around his weapon hilts. He continues to walk forward, making no attempts to hide himself. He reaches the corpse of high ranking soldier, clothed in silver chain armor. As he steps over the body he brings his foot down, stomping on the mans throat, not breaking stride.

"Bastard... makes me do everything," growls as he continues walking towards the group his eyes catching sight of the other three figures. He pulls his hood over his head hidding his face, and returning his hands to his weapons.
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Old 02-28-2006, 11:01 PM   #8
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*Allen felt alot better, he had suceeded in blowing an Urgal into goo, Even if Galbatroix had abandoned his mercenaries, Allen would survive. Seeing Jaxyral, Allen recognized that he also worked for his "Liege", Allen ran over and greeted his comrade*

"Hey, wait up!! Any idea on how to get out of this hellhole?"

*Allen continues running, but stops at the Silver armored corpse, he makes a few hand gestures and speaks some of the "Language" and makes it stand up, strip its armor, and then drop again, Allen takes the Armor and weapons, Thinking that this will cover his services in part. He continues on to Jaxyral.*
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Old 02-28-2006, 11:39 PM   #9
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Turns around slowly, drawing both his slightly blue tinted blades. His eyes change to a more rage filled blue color. Then studies the newcomer resheathing his blades as his eyes fill with emotions again. He nods to Allen, "Aye, finish the job then we can leave."
He nods to the armor, that Allen carries, "Whats that for?"
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Old 02-28-2006, 11:47 PM   #10
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*Allen smiles.*

"Payment, Im looting like no tomorrow. So we wiping that Rider off like a speck of grease? If we are, Ive got just the thing."

*Allen puts the armor in his back pack, and then withdraws a black vial.*

"Black powder, I dont care if youre a Dragon, Youll feel this."

*Allen then laughs evilly*
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Old 02-28-2006, 11:55 PM   #11
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Tatsua lets go of the Urgal as he hears something. Turning towards the voices, he saw Allen, and Jax.
"So two lackeys for his king I see", Tatsua said drawing his sword. It's diamond blade gleamed in the light.
"But now. If you want to kill Eragon, then you're going to have to go through me".
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:03 AM   #12
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*Allen whirls around and draws Velketor's Nail, Its blade glows an evil Navy, and Allens eyes flare red.*

"Ashran geth kor xixil."

*The corpses begin to get up and draw there weapons.*

"Kill the Human..."

*The Corpses begin to lumber toward Tatsua, Allen begins to apply an Oil to his sword.*
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:12 AM   #13
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"Thou shouldn't tred on the spirits of the fallen. Do not disgrace their souls", Tatsua said,"Adurna"!
Ice shot up from the ground around him. Freezing the moving corpses.
"Now how bout you fight me, instead of my dead comrades".
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:17 AM   #14
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*Allen smiled, The corpses were a distraction.*

"Lord Mephisto, I need you to give my hand the touch of Alchemy..."

*Allen then looks straight at Tatsua, and laughs demonically*

"Im more of a warrior then you could ever be, Mortal. Prepare to meet Mephisto!

*Allen then pulls a potion out of his satchel, its contents are blood red, He drinks it, and his Image begins to blur, He then dashes through the corpses and Attacks Tetsua."
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:23 AM   #15
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Turns his gaze to Tatsua, and glances to Allen, "As long as you carry it..."

Pulls his blades quickly, automaticaly going into a defensive posture. His eyes fading back to there rage filled state, and smirks. "You'r out numbered... surender."

Takes a few steps forward swords extended defensively
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:31 AM   #16
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Tatsua stood calmly as Allen rushed at him.
"I am Tatsua Semori", he said,"The last of my clan. Remember it as you rush to the gates of hell".
Tatsua held his blade in front of him. Closing his eye, he jumped over Allen.
''Gedwey sverdar", he said as his sword began to glow,"My turn".
Tatsua dissappeared, then reappeared next to Allen, then another on appeared, then another.
"Out numbered am I", one Tatsua asked,"I think not".
One of him stepped in front of Jax, the other two surrounded Allen.
"Now watch my power", they all said at once, rushing at their opponents.

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Old 03-01-2006, 12:35 AM   #17
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*Allen kept on moving, right by the Images, and he then backflipped, dropping the blackpowder, It explodes in the area of the Images.*

"Im a disciple of what amounts to the Devil, Im the doorkeeper of hell in comparison to you, Ninja.

*Allen then returns to being fully on the prime material.*

"Furthermore, I have you outnumbered, and I can also do.. this!"

*He hurls a Vial of Acid at the vicinity of the Images, just as the exsplosion finishes.*
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:41 AM   #18
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Lunges forward, seemingly faster than a normal elf. Both blades extended in a ruthless cross meaning to quickly disembowl his opponent. Ducking under the blades in a defensive move to avoid a repoist, or high slash. His feet agiley planted on the ground to retreat if neaded or drop to the ground.

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Old 03-01-2006, 12:45 AM   #19
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"Ninja", Tatsua laughed,"I'm the diamond warrior, Tatsua Semori. And by my blade shall you fall".
The three Tatsua's placed their blades together, then disappeared. The vial of acid hit the ground.
"Cheap tricks won't win this", he said picking the vial up. It began to float in his palm, the vanished. Swing his blade around. He held his free hand straight into the air.
"Kazentra", he shouted. Instantly the wind began to pick up. Tearing the ground up. Almost like a tornado.
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Old 03-01-2006, 12:52 AM   #20
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Growls deeply, feraly, and turns to the real Tatsua. Rushing forward to meet him one blade extended the other reserved, defensive. His blade aimed for Tatsua's heart. The other discretly swiping towards his leg, in a attempt to slash his femoral artery, while one booted foot comes up to kick him in his gut. Maintaning his balance despite the horrendous winds.
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*The winds knock Allen to the ground, On top of a Vial of Phophorous, He bursts into flames, but is seemingly Unaffected*

"The Flames of the Gate are far worse than this, Prepare to die, Diamond Warrior."

*Allen Slowly walks forward, the flames picking up intensity, he is a walking Inferno, He draws the Nail of Velketor and flicks it, Engulfing it in flames as well. He then walks for Tatsua, he then stops far enough away that he wont burn Jaxyral, but close enough to intervene.*

"Jaxyral, be prepared for I shall attack, Get out of the way!!"

[He drank a Fire Resist potion, hes just screwing with Tats head, It was a two effect potion in the Red Liquid.]
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Old 03-01-2006, 01:15 AM   #22
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His blades flare blue as Allen nears, he ignores the flames seemingly consuming Allen. Intent on quickly dispatching Tatsua. He brings his knee up to knee Tatsua in the stomach as he thrusts foward with both blades aiming for his chest.

"I'm fine," he growls behind him
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Old 03-01-2006, 07:10 AM   #23
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During the battle, Arya had been watching the fight. She recognized Allen and Jax and two people whom worked for the empire, and was glad that Tatsua seemed to be against them.

She looked back and noticed Eragon and Saphira arrived but were not attempting to fight. ~Yes, perhaps we should leave this fight to them. The sun is rising.~ She stood and walked to the edge of the battle field to see if any of the components would stir.
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"Middle of a lover's quarrel am I", Tatsua laughed as he jumped off the ground, bouncing off Jax's head. Then landing five feet away.
"But fire's dangerous", he said,"You don't want to get burned".
Tatsua held his arm out in front of him.
"Adurna", he said as ice lept from his palm at the now burning Allen.
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*The Ice Melts before it even hits the flames*

"I will ask for your surrender only once, Diamond warrior."

*Allen flicks his wrist, sending the chemical flames at Tatsua. His arm is covered in an Aura similar to Velketor's Nail.*

"Yeild, or be engulfed in the fires f my Hatred for the so called "Riders"."

*Allen spits as he says the name, although it sounds like steam hissing to everyone else.*
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